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Love, Kylie

"I absolutely love this story. I really hipe you add more: it’d be a shame if you’d forgotten about it. This is truly fascinating. Its unique storyline is what makes it all the better. You’re very creative in your writing style, and you have my respect for that. Insipiration is what I get when I read this. Its inspiring, its full of imagination, its so unique, and I dont think many could have done much better. I rated this five stars in everything because the grammar mistakes I noticed were hardly recognizable, because of the want to focus on whats happening."

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kidnapped

"i like the story but the ending idk how to feel about it also i think you missed a few parts and could better explained things "

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Kidnaped it's an amazing idea and plot although it is really confusing at times, I'm not going to give too much away but I don't understand how she knows her kidnapers

"It's an amazing idea and plot although I don't understand, some parts of it. I am not going to give it all away but I don't understand how she knows her kidnappers. "

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Kidnapped

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