What is your opinion?
EVERYONE SHOULD READ THIS STORY!!
"this story is amazing so far! It ends with cliffhangers that just want to make me know more and Marie Rose is a young girl making it easy to relate too."
Great Beginning
"This is definitely a very good beginning. It pulled me in quickly and held my attention. Lots of early action sets up for a great story to be told. I look forward to seeing where your characters go and how their journey unfolds. Great work keep it up! :-)"
Attention Grabbing!
"Once you start reading the story you really want to know what happens next! Great job! I love hhow every chapter ends on a cliffhanger, leaving you wanting more and ready for the next chapter, Very Effective."
Amazing!
"This story blew me off my feet at the first sentences. They were well worded, thoughtfully put together and an udder sucess. Marie Rose was a great character choice because even at a young age, many coud relate to her. QueenMonkey123, there is nothing more I can say. Great job!"
Marie Rose: The Artic Rose
"The story's interesting so far, though my main gripe is that we might be moving a bit too fast, I'd like to know a bit more of Marie Rose's and Adam's relationship before the accident since I don't really feel much between them. Marie Rose was mainly explaining the relationship but we're not shown much of it except for that quick exchange before the accident. Allow scenes to flow more smoothly instead of jumping to one event to another since it can confuse readers.. I also wonder if you really needed the hospital exploding, it felt kind of random, especially since Adam is already hospitalized so it doesn't really do anything except keep him out of the picture longer, that part also flew by really fast since we immediately skip to another scene and it's almost forgotten. Adam can still be in a coma since he got hit by a car, so you can just leave it at that. These are just some suggestions, I'm trying not to be harsh or anything and I apologize if I do, the story does sound interesting and it does make me curious to know what'll happen next. Just keep in mind on how you establish characters and pacing."
Marie Rose: The Arctic Rose
"I haven’t read the whole thing but . . . PLOT TWIST!! ADAM’S PARENTS’ CAR BROKE DOWN IN ANTARCTICA AND THEY BE TRYNA CALL AN UBER BUT THEY AINT GOT NO CELL SERVICE SO MARIE ROSE AND LIZZIE HAVE TO GO SAVE THEM INSTEAD OF ADAM CAUSE HES ALREADY DEAD🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯"
Marie Rose: The Arctic Rose Review
"I really don’t mean to hurt your feelings, but I there is just something I don’t like about this story. Again, I’m not trying to be mean. Although the plot is very interesting, just starting with “Hi, I’m Marie Rose,” sounds very unprofessional. A suggestion would be to start the story out with the setting and more about Marie Rose and Adam’s relationship before they get in the accident. I would also suggest to edit and revise your story multiple times before sending it to a publisher as I found many grammar and spelling mistakes throughout. I am so sorry if I sound too harsh but I’m just putting my opinion out there."
