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Will be reading the next chapters too

"Perfect mix of darker-ish themes, beautiful visuals / gore-ish visuals, poetic writing, the metaphors and just all the emotions you make me feel through all of the above I really want to see this one through, no pressure there You've mistaken 'then' for 'than' And other than that little grammar mistake, I really cant find anything wrong with this story.At all. A personal favorite moment of mine so far, is the description of the tree in chapter 2, the tree itself, the leaves, the irony of the whole thing with the carved heart and initials in the trunk of it.. Scratch that, theres no favorite moments, all of it is favorite moments The scenery, the bodies, 'why has god forsaken us', the hunters, the writing.I love all of the utter desperation, destruction, gloominess, uncertainty and overall awfulness going on for these guys Can't wait to see what will follow! Would love to see more on how these people are living"

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Good jobs like always!

"The descriptive nature you use is something that many will appreciate. Also you left us with a air of mystery with why is their a dead hanged man in a field of wheat with a statue of David in it as well. I'm about to read your new book and I truly hope I like it. Also if i may be so bold to ask this of you: Could you please read my new book The Insiders? It would really make my day if a author of your caliber would read and review it. Thanks from your long term reader, UnknownDigger"

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