What is your opinion?
Interesting!
"I really enjoyed this story and look forward to reading more! The author's voice is engaging and the characters intriguing! I cant wait to see the finished product."
Nice and simple
"I especially liked the blurb. The conversations felt very real, and you wrote it in a way that made the story feel simplified, yet easy to follow. Very well-written."
Its more than a nice book
"I like generally like it. The plot, the grammar is clear and easy to follow the authors creativity is at an elevated level , I couldn't write better than that. Its more than a nice book. The way she illustrations every action in it, and how all the parts of the story perfectly fall together to build the whole story makes you feel like you are part of the story, it makes the story feel so real. I would recommend it a thousand times. "
awesome
"the plot is really interesting.keeps me thinking what's gonna happen next .looking forward to more of work."
Amazing!!
"That was amazing to read! I hope to see more!!"
Red
"This is a great start to what seems to be an intriguing story. There is one place that needs proper punctuation. where your sentence should have a comma but instead AND starts the sentence. I am looking forward to your next chapter."
NICE
"I really like it! can't wait to read the whole book. Keep writing!"
Looks Interesting
"I liked the way you have revealed all the details about the characters. The story does sound promising. Lets see what is in store in the next chapters. Im not an experienced writer as such, so dont know about any minor errors taht you might have made. But as a reader, I loved it. It was a perfect beginning! Would be eagerly waiting for more updates."
Red
"This is an opening with masses of potential. I loved your opening paragraph in particular and thought it was a particularly nice, not to mention original, way to draw your reader into the story. Your writing style has some lovely original lines, one of my favourites being 'he seemed to have a notion to stroll under their shade as if reaching our destination would mean the end of his life' and flows very well. Alexander's characterisation is particularly strong too, particularly with the way he called your MC 'Shorty', which was quite funny. I can only really think of two things to improve your story as it is at the moment and they're pretty small. Firstly, if a line of speech doesn't end with a ? or ! and it's not at the end of the line it needs to end with a comma, not a full stop. Secondly, the Great Wall the only thing keeping me from the outside' is quite a redundant phrase and you can probably cut it. Well done on this, anyway! Keep writing! :)"
intriguing
"Liked this, especially the writing style, and the narrative voice, it's not too much over the top. But the plot could be developed more...few edits for grammar (minor) . All I can say is good job and keep on writing it!"
I loved this!!
" This story sounds really good so far, and I’m looking forward to the next chapter. Though I noticed a few grammar errors, it was nothing too major. I hope you update soon!!"
Red
"It seems pretty good. But that bit about not having a gate in the wall. How about just that the children don't know where the gate is. I have heard that bit about not wanting the children to go to school. It sounds like the kind of thing people don't want children to do when they are not sure they can maintain their position if the children do go to school."
