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Daddy's Girl

"Quite the erotic story. Very detailed and well written."

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Loved it

"Inte varje dag man blir nöjd och får komma två gånger😍 tack för extra hjälpen🌶️"

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Daddys girl

"A second chapter would be great "

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"Daddy's Girl"

"I thought it was a pretty good short story, emphasis on 'short'. I'd love to see this as a book with a longer build up. Still, it was a good quick read."

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Wil

"Enjoyed the topic.. Thanks for keeping her legal tender... One bright spot was keeping her a virgin until she willingly gave the prize to Daddy...You could've done a bit of naughty flirting as she grew older because the Key is to not cross the line until they're 18. By one minute or 11 months. Makes no difference. A nice twist would be for her to go off to Standford and just so happen to meet another girl who's either had a crush on one of her Hunk'y Relatives or even a Dad or Maybe a Step Dad. There's lots of opportunities to make into a Dynamite Novel. All you must remember is it's Fiction!! "

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Wish there was more to this story

"I will give 5 stars if you add more to the story"

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