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"Hi there! This was the best story I've read today! Seriously, the way you described Lynch and the surroundings of the casino really brought it to life. The Soulcatcher is an intriguing device; I want to know more about it! I hope you keep writing this story. I know it says 'complete' next to your entry, but this story can go places! If you really want to keep it the way it is---because that's up to you, of course---I'm still behind it, no sweat! It really is great the way it is, one chapter and all! Keep up the good work and keep writing, whatever that may be!"

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