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A Pure Delight

"I absolutely loved this short story that the author obviously put so much time, heart, and soul into. The saying "Dynamite comes in small packages" really does apply to this remarkable story, and I adored it. Well crafted, charming, suspenseful, and beautifully written."

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amazing

"beautiful story and i love the writing style"

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Good work!

"I really like your style of writing, there's a really nice flow to it! Also, I never thought a story about fairies could sent shivers down my back... It seems like it would work as a sort of prologue to a longer story, I'd love to read one like that."

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