Great Book

"I really liked your plot, however, there are a few spots where you can improve on. Improve grammar and punctuation and this book will be perfect (there's also a few mistakes in the blurb). You can add Grammarly to your browser in order to help you fix that. For example: "Hello" he said. This is wrong. "Hello," he said. This is correct. You must add a comma, question mark, or exclamation mark at the end of dialogues. This is the main problem I found in your book. I found a few run-on sentences. Try making the sentences shorter. Also, in the title, you must capitalize the word "Hatred." If you improve on these, your book will be perfect! -Ellie"