What is your opinion?
Good start
"The author has set the stage well to begin her story. The boy she is bumping into constantly intrigued me. Her writing style is smooth and easy to read. I can't wait to see what happens next since there were only 4 chapters posted. I wanted to read how Emma looks like e.g. her physical attributes, etc. which makes her confident to want to be a top end model. Overall it has promises to be a good story. Keep up the good work."
Nice!
"Although I can't judge very well yet because of how short this is, I have to say I really enjoyed this book. When I found out it was about a model, I was a bit sceptical at first. I thought the idea was typical, and perhaps also over-used, but then I really enjoyed it. Bonus! I also think you portrayed the characters well, you grounded the reader so that nothing was confusing. The sentence structure was good; your paragraphs neither too short nor too long. You also had lovable characters and an easy-to-picture setting. Sometimes, you forgot commas here or there, and made tense mistakes. I also think the first line in every chapter should have been grammatically correct, but you used "i" instead of "I", forgot capital letters, and punctuation. I assume there were supposed to be chapter names - perhaps try transferring them to the chapter name itself? Apart from these small typos, you did many things well. I generally don't enjoy this kind of book, but this was a fun, quick, great read. Keep writing!"
Nice!
"I feel that the start of the book was not hooking at all. It was normal start as if you are starting a chapter not a book. I think you should work a little on it like telling us about the appearance of heroine or her surrounding or something which gives as an idea of what we are going to read. I also find a lot of punctuation mistakes in this book which can be easily taken care of with a help of an editor."
Good start
"I like your writing style. It would be really nice if you could write long chapters. Other than that, your work is pretty good."
A good start
"The start of the story was pretty good, it didn't get me super hooked but everyone knows nothing interesting happens until you read further. I was like 'What am I about to read?" when I saw it was about a model. However, as I kept on reading it actually got interesting and I found myself vibing with Emma every time she knocked into that mysterious guy especially with all the comebacks! I've seen heaps of books that are filled with mistakes so I didn't really mind the mistakes every now and then. My opinion right now; don't focus too much on the spelling and grammar since your so early in your story. Don't get me wrong though, do fix those mistakes because it's definitely annoying when the reader picks up on mistakes! You can always go back after your done and edit! :)) Anyway... Just keeping doing what you're doing because you're doing great!"
