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wow

"This is just wow! I can't believe this. Chapter 5 was what got me really hooked to this. There are some grammar mistakes in the story but it's still great. If the grammar would be fixed then it would be even greater."

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Hazardously Hilarious

"When I first read the blurb of this story, I knew that tragical things were bound to happen but happiness was destined to flourish in the very end. The 5th chapter ended on a cliffhanger, leaving me breathless and helplessly waiting for more. I hope that the author will make a quick update to it as I cannot wait for the next chapter to be unveiled. The story has a few typos and grammatical errors, but they have not distracted me from enjoying its contents. If you are looking for a heartbreakingly sweet story that will make you forget about your everyday problems, don't forget to download and read this story. You will not regret it, I guarantee you. This is a thumbs up for me! Kuddos to the author for creating such an unpredictable plot and memorable characters."

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Meh

"Predictable… I couldn’t get into it as there was no suspense or anything to keep my attention. Grammatical errors were driving me crazy as well…"

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