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The best

"The best short love story I ever read. And the best ideal man I ever met!"

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The girlfriend experience

"Great short story"

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The Girlfriend Experience

"An enjoyable short story but the pre ending was a bit damp"

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Falling inlove again

"I would recommend it to every one who doesnt believe in love and I love the plot the wring style everything"

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Amazing book

"Loved it soo much. I was hoping I wouldn't be left stranded but it ended well"

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The girlfriend experience

"I enjoyed the story"

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Good

"Its n good story. I like the way it was written"

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A good story very well written

"As someone who's dealt with literature for most of her life, I am usually very picky with fiction, but I must say that this one is extremely well written. The prose is fluid, even poetic from time to time and, apart from sporadic minor typos, this text is excellent (something rarely found here on Inkitt and that deserves to be called "professional"). The story is not the most original, but it is dealt with taste and liveliness, the occasional smut is enjoyable, and there are a couple of plot twists very well orchestrated. I agree with some of the criticisms I've read in other reviews, however, that the ending is a bit rushed."

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Gets good quickly!

"I love how it doesn't waste time and gets right to the good parts!! However, it also seems a little rushed like it just skips parts too. But overall I like it. "

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Love it!!!

"I love this story so much!!"

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Awesome story thank you so much

"Awesome story thank you so much for the story "

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The girlfriend experience

"Such a cute story😍😍 Really loved it ❤️"

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Alex

"Thoroughly enjoyed this story please write more"

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The girlfriend experience

"I enjoyed the story it was great "

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Wonderful

"This is a wonderful story to read.. Nice.."

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😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

"❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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Review

"Love the plot of the story, love the characters all except Theo he was really a piece of work "

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😍😍

"Loved it❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣"

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It was Amazing

"This book was amazing and I'm sad that it had to end "

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guet gschlafe und

"ich habe bereits einen termin mit der gemeinschaft für den letzten platz mit der gemeinschaft in den nächsten tagen in den letzten jahren in den nächsten jahren in den ferien mit der gemeinschaft in "

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