Behind the unseen stars

"Aside from the grammatical errors it was an interesting experience I enjoyed the book "

Behind the unseen stars

"Please finish this story"

MY STAR LIONESS

"Writer has not written clearly there is so much of confusion the story suddenly changes and no connection among them the subject is good ,well done"

Amazing!

"Amazing! I love this book! It’s so good to read at all times! "

I really enjoyed reading behind the unseen stars

"I really enjoyed reading behind the unseen stars ,I'm not gonna waste time about the writing as I'm sure others have done enough the over all story was really great I hope there is a second"

Behind the unseen stars

"Really...it can't end like that. Was enjoying the book then finish.My first time reading a book like this and I enjoyed it very much."

Behind the unseen stars

"This is the moat amazing book I have ever read.. yes it's in need of editing BUT if you are a good reader you will just keep reading .. the plot and twists everything is simply AWESOME "

love the story, I can't wait to read more! I really hope that Rina can get rid of her father.

"Again I say I hope Rina can get rid of her father, and for good. I mean it wouldn't be a nice life to always have to worry about it, and to wonder if your children are safe. That stuff would just suck, I mean can you imagine 24/7 constantly wondering and worrying, if your own father, was coming that day to kill you and your cubs/children? Would not enjoy it one bit, I would probably just end up getting extremely stressed out and freak out at the littlest of things."

A good story

" It's a good story even with misspellings, and problems with word usage. Construtive criticism is have others proofread your manuscript."

Great detail laughed so hard in fight with jeliouse lion

"The book needs edited other than that can not stop reading, it was so funny had to read some outloud to my sister😊👍"

Great idea and storyline...

"Very good story. I like the plot, characters and descriptions. Only downside is spelling and punctuation. It leads me to believe this author is young...love everything else. So readers be advised..."

Lucas mate

"This is a gripping novel with many plot twists and turns. Over all it is a very good read."

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Mesmerizing!!!!

"The story is too good..... The characters are so much alluring... I m already a fan... "

Great story, lots of misspelled words, and incorrect words

"I love the story, however there are several issues. There are several words misspelled, and then there are blatantly wrong words. For example, cup for cubs, made for mate, and others that simply make no sense. "

Behind the unseen stars

"When are tou going to complete this or write the sequel"

Behind the unseen stars

"Even with the terrible spelling and wording, the story was great. Can't wait for the sequel. "

Interesting.....

"It is keeping me interested so far but it has a lot of mixed up stuff and a lot of words that don't go with the sentence. But it going good . Looking forward to finishing it."

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