Wanting for More

"This is definitely something that should be read. Even with only two chapters out, your story has captured my attention. The MC is established wonderfully, with her personality being clear and easy to read. This same courtesy can be extended to the establishment of the world, With the dialogue from the illegal ring owner and the situation in the ring handing out important details organically. No real problem with the story except for its length, which is expected due to it being incomplete and how large your blurb is. I can't wait for your next chapter, and wich you well on your story."