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Blood Queen

"Did you rewrite the story? I liked it better when she could actually speak without any problem, though she spoke only when necessary. You had gotten so far with the first draft. Looking forward to see what other changes you make."

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Blood Queen

"Nice and concept of environment is fantastic"

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Blood queen (werewolf tale)

"I hate waiting be so far it I really good can't wait til it is finished."

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Blood Queen

"A very riveting read, thanks for an interesting story. Sadly too short, is there another book after this one?,🥰🥳🙌🏽"

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Baie goed

"Ek het baie van die storie gehou, daar kan meer sulke stories geskryf word. Baie min spel foute en mooi uit een gesit"

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A true woman.

"The one thing I love about the story is the writer did not sugarcoat and add unnecessary things. The writer followed a true journey of a woman's suffering in a real world. Like someone said, ' A perfect woman seldom make history',or so along these lines. 😊"

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Blood Queen

"I have enjoyed this story I can't wait for the next book "

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Addicting action packed

"Very good plot, plenty of heartache, action, blood and gore. Several main characters who are strong. Im addicted couldnt stop reading. Highly recommend "

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The Road To The Throne Can Be Costly

"The Author brings the Reader behind the scenes of building and maintaining an Empire..It combines mystery, fantasty and realism to present a fast paced, page turning, want to get the next stage story...This Reader is on edge, awaiting the next instalments and the finale..While you are given hints that like all feel good stories, good will triumph over evil; it is not a walk in the park. There is tragedy, pain, pathos and loss along the journey.This however, adds motive and realism to the plot..It is also interesting how the usual human characteristics pop up; laziness, bitterness, bigotry, lust for power, megalomania, racial or in this case; interspecies bias, and best of all true love. Nathan, the King, Court has ladies who are actually whores at heart, wanting position for power sake and whores, our Heroine, ( although she was forced into sexual activities against her will and knowledge by the use of several drugs)case in point are Queens at heart, loving people and not wanting power just for the sake of lording it over everyone. As a student of history, several strong Queens came to mind, about two Chinese Empresses ( dont remember the spellings so I dont to want to misquote), Queen Elizabeth the first, Queen Victoria especially relating to the fact that she lost her consort, Prince Albert, and had to rule solo for most of her reign, Queen Isabella of Spain in the time of Christopher Columbus and Catherine the Great of Russia, a powerful leader who had to hold off challenges from external and internal foes to keep the vast Russian Empire together... A great read, would love see more of this Author's work 👍👍👍👍👍👏"

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Very intriguing story line! Could not stop reading!

"Well-developed characters, fantastically strong leads, jaw-dropping, heart-racing story line...it just keeps getting better and better! Bravo!!!"

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Amazing and a great plot with developed characters

"Amazing and very well thought out with a great plot and very developed characters that are well rounded and show a wide range of emotions."

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The Survivor

"Great Story could not stop until the end, or well just about the end. Will recommend this story to any one looking for a plot with the woman being the main character. The most interesting part of this book was when the main character was kidnapped by the villian! Ahhh! the dramatic turn around of her strong personality being bought down by drug to keep her willing! Great technical writing."

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Loved it!!!

"I really liked this one!!"

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Good

"Very enjoyable "

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"I like this story, it’s quite interesting and dark. There are some parts that need editing, but overall this is a great draft of a story."

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the survivor

"It is sooooo good so far, i am still in love!!!"

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Good

"Keeps me entertained chanter are likeable. Easy read"

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