What is your opinion?
Star Vansion Moonorio
"I like the whole story. I hate not knowing who the man is that has been waiting 200 years for Jammy. I hope there is a 2nd book about Jammy and her friends!"
Rejected alpha
"Great book a must read i love all the wolves they are awesome. i hope LI will get happiness and finally reject Marcus for all his cheating and lies he deserves to be rejected he deserves Lucy the whore for sleeping with someone's mate when she had a mate of her own."
Review
"Good Work Keep it up ☺️☺️😉☺️😉"
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"Good Work Keep it up ☺️☺️😉☺️😉"
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"Good Work Keep it up ☺️☺️😉☺️😉"
Love but there has to be a book 2
"What!!!!!!😱🤷🏼♀️ This is a wonderful book but it can not end like that!!!!"
I love the story when can I get to read book2
"When can I get to read the book 2 "
Star vansion moonorio
"The story is good and interesting but one thing to say is that the author has to improve a lot.the story is interesting and the plotline is amazing. The author has to change the way the story is narrated. It's a good work from author I enjoyed the book alot.grammer and writing style must be improve alot"
Bella
"This is a awesome book with interesting plot.....looking for book 2.. loved it"
Awesome story
"Amazing writer"
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"Other than pets of story sounding like a grade schooler wrote it, this was a good story. Enjoyed reading iit "
excellent
"i tell anyone if you want to read a good book this is the one.. excellent work ..keep up the good work"
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"Who could the lady in black cloak be"
Love the book
"I would recommend book It’s on the long side but so worth it Good job"
Star vanison moonorio
"I enjoyed reading the story"
Something differ
"I liked the story so far waiting for next part"
Jamline and the Moonario kingdom
"I love the creativity and thinking this author has. The technical writing aspects are definitely in question for American literacy. So many words and tenses are out of place. I love the author's creativity being all inclusive with the different species. Keep pushing forward all writers."
Good story
"I really tired to understand and follow the story but it is difficult to follow. I liked the plot and way you built the characters. The idea was great and the characters were strong, but the story was just to difficult to follow. I think it has lots of potential. It just needs some work in grammar and punctuation. I liked the build up to the end but then felt like that there were so many unanswered questions and unresolved issues that it was kind of a let down. I know this story with a little help could be an excellent story but as written it falls short of it's full potential. Still great effort and just get someone to help you with the grammar and run on sentences. This would make the story much easier to follow. Thanks I did enjoy it."
Moonorio
"First of all it was really hard to understand the story. I'm really hoping that English is not your first language and that it is the first time you tried writing a book. To be honest the grammar is horrible, the sentences completions are terrible. I had to rearrange the sentences in order to understand what you as a writer was trying to convey.... On that note... Not all is bad. After struggling with the reading, I really liked your story, although you had to many fillers and dragged the explanation like the Chinese wall. My recommendation to you is to read your own story before uploading. Try to understand what you as a writer is trying to convey to you readers. Check for grammatical error, sentence completion etc. This is my honest feedback to you. I see a lot of potential and room for a lot of improvement. If you manage to rewrite this story properly you have potential to sell it. It will attract a lot of readers. Keep in my and do not drag a story longer than necessary and stop using filler that doesn't add to the contribution of the story flow. I can fell the struggle of you character's, the pain, the love, hate and all that comes with it. At some point you really had me LMAO. I can honestly say it's enjoyable. With love XOXOXO 🤗🤗🤗🤗"
Star
"Only got part ways in and no longer able to read it. It's poorly written and die to grammatical errors hard to understand. A writing app might be able to help this story. "
