Inkitt
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"First things first, I loved how this story started, although of course not the situation itself, but because it just presents the problem and the main character. This is very good quick read of you're looking for something to just sit cozily with. Although there are minor and not very much spelling grammar mistakes, I get the drift of the story pretty well and enjoyed reading about Desi."

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Cute LGBT+ story

"I really liked the plot espescially because I'm LGBTQ+ too. (Sorry for the spelling I'm from Germany♥️)"

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Amazing!

"Everything was so realistic about life, and I loved how you added unexpected turns in the story. I really love this story so much! Keep up the great work and write more as soon as possible!"

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Good Read

"This is a good read dealing with sensitive subjects. The author does a great job in showing that love is love is love! There were a few little errors nothing that another editing run would not fix. Reading your work out loud helps you find those pesky errors. All is all a wonderful job. I urge you to keep writing and refining your talent."

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the best 💖

"As a Demigirl and being bi it’s really relatable. This story is so good and amazing! If I can give it an 1000 I would. 💖❤️"

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