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Samira

"Great book. I few grammar errors but good. "

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great

"none itl is great novel"

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Samira

"Love this story!"

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Samaris

"I loved everything it's an amzing book and I would recommedn it to detailed readers"

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Samira

"What an amazingly skilled author she just sweeps me away to so many different cultures and worlds. Danger and triumph, love and kindness, love for her people and friends made into family. The author has mentioned she had dyslexia I think it was and some words may be jumbled. The main words I found are the correct use of our and are, were and where, and off and of. Looking forward to Book 4. Yea!!!"

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Great

"Awesome story. Some of the chapters you had are for our and of for off. But was not a problem to get through. Cant wait to read the rest"

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Samira

"Love the story line love the series some of your grammer you could work on but I understand and overall I really love to series and I hope to read more."

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Samira

"Love the series can't wait to read the next book"

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Oh yeah! That's better.

"Whoof! Ahhhhhh. 30 chapters. Mmm. I - am - stuffed! [Belch]. Yeah baby! So. Uh, 5 stars again. OK seriously. Wonderful series. Incredibly addictive. These books are proving very hard for me to put down."

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"Still needs work with editing. But exciting! Love this plot. Characters are fun. "

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