You're a bad person, Katy.
You have evilly stolen my children's Father from them for the last two days because I could NOT - PUT - THIS - DOWN! I loved it! It has been too long since I've been sucked in by your engrossing writing style. And this was wonderful. OK. now for the egotistical opinion. Which is to say, things I would change if I could.
Read the story now
- Ditch Ryan as a character. He brings nothing to the story and you have a ton of other characters we would all love to see more of in this story.
- All the scenes with Finn, starting with the trip to Hawaii and on, should be swapped out with Pan. From a romantic point of view it just makes more sense. I would even go back and add a few scenes where Pan is a jerk to Nix before they bond.
But even "As Is," I would easily recommend this story to anyone who is a fan of Modern Fantasy.
And now I have to move on to your next book. :)