What is your opinion?
Great book
"This book has great potential. I can see it being sold on Amazon in the future. It definitely needs some editing, though. I am a voracious reader. I read about 10 books a week. Plus I am an older lady. I love this book. I am eagerly reading through the series.great job!"
fantastic
"actions scene for derek"
Ready
"I thoroughly enjoyed this story the creativity that this author used to blend and mesh her characters together into her view of family is so much like mine it’s scary (except for the Kingly & Queenly bits lol). Loved it!"
Ready
"Awesome series. Love it"
Ready
"I love the series. Each book is harder to put down then the last and I can’t wait to read the final two. "
Wonderful issue.
"Easily 5 stars again. I am obviously hooked. HOWEVER! Sorry. I love doing that. I have noticed something about the story. I wasn’t sure I wanted to mention it because I couldn’t tell if it was me thinking the story should be more like something I would write OR if it was something that should change. I’m going to go ahead and say it and you can decide for yourself if you want to change things or not. So you have these scenes throughout the story. BOOK 1: The Christmas dinner with Drew and Kayla’s parents, Marco finally catching her and her parents coming to her at the hotel. Book 2: 37 at the door in Germany. Book 3: Ally at Christmas when green turned red. (Sorry about talking in code. Trying not to give any spoilers here) And Book 4: 30 with her alone at the mall. Her talking to her mom about who was really behind the assassination attempt. All of these scenes have the potential for you to REALLY jam some dramma into them. These are those moments when you can go over the top with it. But you seem to kind of shy away from that. I think you should go back and read these scenes again and mull em over. See what kind of dramatic stuff comes flying out. Because these are the kind of moments that can really make this story phenomenal. A little clarification. NO. I have not been generous with my 5 stars. [5* = Can’t put it down.] You hit that consistently with every issue of this series. What I’m suggesting is NOT needed. I just think it could be even better. Now if you’ll excuse me. I have to ignore the plees of my family and move on to Book 5:)"
Review
"Still needs work with editing But loving the series. Love the wedding! It's like watching them grow up"
