What is your opinion?
Armonia
"Interessante racconto, mi sono un pò smarrita nella formattazione con poche punteggiature, e tanti personaggi che sono certa con i prossimi capitoli troveranno la giusta collocazione, leggerò il seguito con interesse, complimenti per questo inizio."
Harmony
"The constant repeating when the POV changes is annoying. "
interestin,g!
"interesting lots of twist"
Harmony
"I hope this isn't the end! "
Harmony
"Wowza! Again and again you continually surprise me and you really shouldn’t what with all the books I’ve read so far. Love 💕 their story and hope that it continues a bit longer but I’m sure you’ve got a couple more series just dying to be written. Thank you! Xo"
5 stars. I know. At this point it’s just ridiculous.
"OK Katy. So the POV changes. I think you use them well from a structural point of view. But what they contain is overkill. You have a lot of redundant info in these POV changes. I do want you to keep them. But you have got to trim the repeat information. When you have three different POV’s of the same conversation with the same text throughout most of them. It starts to look like filler to the reader. So keep the POV’s. They do a great job of filling in for an omniscient narrator. BUT trim out any of the redundant stuff and give us the things that were not present in the previous POVs. I liked what you did in one chapter of this book where you had two small POV’s in the same chapter. You can do more of that or make a really small chapter to break up the flow a bit. With that said. I know you’ve written many of these books and just to be sure you know which scene I’m talking about, {avoiding spoilers}. In regards to the part where Peter and Rune are on bikes while Tara and Sam hide in a tree with Tara’s bike? I have a favor to ask you. Can you go to my profile and read my book “Solarian down?” I’d like you to have a look at how I handle this. If you love it like or hate it. Let me know. This is an important part of the story so it is kind of important how much weight you should or shouldn’t put on my opinion. Also I love your work and would like to know what you think of mine. So I’m selfish here but with a purpose. ;) In the meantime, I have to move on to Liberty. Because you said I should. God speed, Spider Woman."
Harmony
"3 stars but honestly I'm reading the unedited version, so I'm sure it will all be fixed! Love love love these books!"
Hoi
"This story was amazing! I loved it so!"
Harmony
"I love this book. The plot is captivating and though it's a fantasy it's totally relatable.The author's writing style is really good and it appeals to my sarcastic sense of humour so the more reason to love it. "
binge-worthy read
"I really love this series! Great story line and flow to the writing. Even unedited it's amazing and I can still get lost in the story this many books in! "
Good story
"The feeling here is that you are using the word calmly too much, there is no need to describe every sentence being spoken as calmly, some errors in word usage which I know you are aware of so not gona highlight it more it's still readable. Lastly I feel that telling the same story in the same book 3 times even when from a different perspective is too much, maybe shorten some parts of it. I like the story line and ideas though keep writing. "
