What is your opinion?
It might be you
"When are you going to post the rest of the book? We are All in suspense! Please update Soon!!"
Loved it
"I loved the characters! The only confusing part was some of the grammar mistakes. Please update soon!!"
It might be you
"Its interesting "
Insecure
"This books really reflect the reality of heartbroken woman who can't seem to trust herself in love again.. Although, her character gives too much depressing about her low self esteem after all happened.. I just felt frustrated that she just can give herself a chance to be in someone care and happy in love again.. Waiting for the update"
love it
"love how mature and elegant and realistic your writing is"
It might be u
"Absolutely interesting but did it have to end there.... curiously awaiting next chapter ... well done.. "
Lovely story so far
"Awesome! This is an amazing story so far. "
Love and Insecurities
"I truely believe that women such as Rainie exist in this world - I know I can definitely relate to her. i think that's why I found this book so enjoyable so far. i can understand her hesitance and reluctant to believe when anybody, not just a man, can pay you such beautiful compliments. Her personality shows, and you can really feel her emotions. A;though the story is a bit slow, I feel it's going to head towards an emotional climax where you cqan't put it down. Just a few things though - the stoy does need a slight editing tweak here and there, and sometimes the names of the person has changed, which I assume is by accident (Chloe is reffered to as Barbie a number of times), but it is an exciting book to read."
Sffghhjkklll
"So far good, but just Needs to pay more attention to the grammar, that way the right idea is conveyed. The story is going well"
It might be yoi
"Nice story"
It Might Be You
"So far, a great read! To be honest, I love the plot of this book. Your characters are witty - especially Chloe, I love her! - and dramatic, which adds a needed interest to the story. I'm excited to see where you take this, and even more excited to finish the chapters that have already been begun! There are a lot of grammatical errors, so I'd recommend getting a beta-reader or a program such as Grammarly. All in all, good job! -Alexia Whitelock"
It Might Be You
"I really liked the way you've started the story, but I'm afraid it was not given full justice. I mean, the feelings have been described well enough and I could picture it all mostly in my head, but the grammar was off a lot. Also, I think that there was too much information given off in the first chapter itself. I mean, my idea of a first chapter is to be either simple or mysterious, so that the reader will have the urge to turn the next page to seek his answers. In this particular kind of beginning, I think that you should've revealed the history of Rainie (pardon me if I got the spelling wrong) and Draven in the subsequent chapters. This is what I feel. Anyway, I liked the plot of your story. I'll read more whenever I get the time. Do keep writing. And also, I would suggest editing each chapter once after completing them. There are a few sentences that are quite confusing, so you could set them right during the edit. No doubt, more will crop up, but the basic grammatical errors will lessen with the first edit. Always. :)"
It might be you
"Not so bad"
