Awesome

"I didn’t see any errrors. I like how you viewed the future in your novel. "

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Very descriptive.

"The writing style of author is great , its a very descriptive scene of her life ."

A good story, but it lacks a clear plot.

"This an interesting start for a good story. The writing style is good and grammar is very iffy at times, but I could still get into it. However what’s missing is a clear cut plot. Not to say that the story is good, it has potential. It’s just that the reader needs to know what the plot if they are to be invested in the story. Overall it’s a good start. Keep the good work, just make sure that the plot is clear."

Beginning of the End

"Only two chapters have been updated so far, so I don't know how much of my review would stand strong and for how long. For one thing, I don't see any link between the title and the plot of the story that is likely to form. I understand that writing is hard work, and I myself am a writer, but I did not feel anything from this book. If I had a choice, I would definitely have left this book halfway through the first chapter. What caught my attention, though, like I already mentioned in the comments, is the narrative style, which was rather amusing to read. Then again, the story had a comparatively uninteresting beginning. I think you could've done better. But then, I might be wrong in the assumption. Also, one more thing I want to say is that, when I first came across your review request and read the teaser of the story, I was under the impression that it was some kind of fantasy. But then, I see that it is likely to turn into a more realistic kind of story. I am sorry, I need more than this to go on. I mean, the way you began your story... it has a lot of potential - it could go in several different ways. I don't think the plot has been opened in the book yet. When that happens, I will have more things to write about. Please do continue the story. It has a lot of potential. All the best!"