Chapter 1
I wandered into the open view. A storm was coming across the depth of the horizon. The clouds gathered into deep wisps of air.The only thing was that they were coming towards me.
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The storm was catching up to me, but I could not see beyond the clouds that dimmed my view. My mind whirled. I thought hard to a time where I had peace and comfort. Unfortunately none would come. I watched as Marell took hits from my classmates. My hands remained by my sides. Frozen. Like they just would not move. Meanwhile I could see the helpless look in Marell's eyes. In the midst of all the punching and stomping, it was amazing how there was a strange sense of peace that came across his face. Like he could not quite feel it. "Cocksucker." "Crooked." A small sensation of guilt stung mel, but what was I doing really sympathizing for him; was I not a thinker, someone that did not know how to relate to others. That sat upon his own island. But soon their beating was over, and the beaten form of my friend met my eyes.
I wandered into the open view. A storm was coming across the depth of the horizon. The clouds gathered into deep wisps of air.The only thing was that they were coming towards me.
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