Inescapable

"This book is fairly good. First of all, the cover could use some work. I cannot read - or even distinguish - the text from the mosaicked background. I use Canva for my covers; it works very well. If you need any help making a cover just tell me, and I'd be happy to help. Second - this story has a lot of potential if you play your cards right. The book starts pretty slowly - I only read two chapters, and neither of them really compelled me to read more - but the idea of Thinkers and Feelers is intriguing. Third - your text could use a lot more adjectives and adverbs. I don't feel very invested in this story or that the world is very well-developed so far. Again, maybe that changes in later chapters. Good luck in your writing, and keep up the good work! -Alexia Whitelock"