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Great read

"If you love a mystery and want to keep on guessing this is a definite read! Loved the story, the plot and the twist. Cant wait to read more thrillers from Ella."

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Lynne

"Nice wee short story didn't take long to read was a bit you know what happens but enjoyable "

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The Letter

"I loved this story, I didn't want to put it down. I love mysteries and enjoyed trying to work out who the killer was. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. Thank you."

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Wow!

"Fun,romantic and a good murder mystery all in one. Great characters, especially Brodie"

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"Well-crafted book I have read. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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The Letters

"Really nice story...a little too much sex that I really did skim over, but overall a great story. Nice characters, a little mystery, a little suspense, a little humor and everything else rolled into the story. Please write some more stories with the same characters, would love the storyline to continue. Good Work! makapueo65 "

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The Letters

"This book was very good I enjoyed it Immensely. I will gladly recommend it to all my family and friends. It is written very well."

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I don't remember

"This book kept me on edge the whole way through it. Early on i thought of Walker as the killer but had to wait to find out. It was nice that i didn't have to crawl through explicit sex scenes."

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The letters

"I like this story so much, I didn't expect I would like it so much. It was really good, so interesting and thrilling.🤗"

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Story

"Amazing story. Great plot twist "

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Its very lovely

"The attempt of the author to give every minute detail helped us, the readers to vidualize every sentence. It also gavesome room for guesswork which means that the reader is captivated by the script. Nice work... keep it up. "

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Enjoyed your style

"It was very well written i was even surprized at the killer and normally i know who the killer might be .. very well planned!"

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The Letters

"I loved it!!"

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The letters

"This book was based out of my home state. The author was on point with locations etc. The main restaurant may have been made up, but willing to check into that. I loved this story. An it had me even laughing early on. Great book! The author has to be from Alabama I have lived in BHam and I was raised in Tuscaloosa, where I currently live again. Roll Tide!"

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Hooked!

"I was hooked and couldn't put it down! Love the characters and the realness of the conversations. Kudos for presenting the story in just a few chapters. "

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Extremely thrilling

"Well nicely knitted plot. At first though I kept wondering but in the later chapters a few suspects tied me to the reading and finishing the story as soon as I can. "

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Loved it

"It was amazing and felt like watching a movie"

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The letters

"Why in the world aren't you writing professionally??!!! You're sooooo good at it !! Everything is good and the cherry on the cake is that humor jokes you put in. Write more!!!! What are you waiting? You're gonna be rich and I'm gonna have some good books to read!! "

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Wooow

"Story should have been long ,and I'm serious that it ended very fast"

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Amazing the facts, and mysterious also .. I love it...

"I like tha mystery of story , suspence amazing... I love it .."

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