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"It was very nice Aki, but if it were me I'd go back over all my grammar and fix everything up. For example, I spotted a few quotes that had periods and then a sentence fragment right afterward. And if I might add the fragment wasn't capitalized. Just a few edits I'd make before I wrap up everything. Overall I loved it! It was very nice!"
