What is your opinion?
I appreciate you work
"Story are shots and entertainment"
One shots
"The stories need a lot of work"
Short live story
"Good short love story. Thanks"
Good
"Good so far"
I think u should create a book already its to short per page..i would like to read a book w/a stroy already but i love ur short stories..take care keep it come
"I would like to read a short not short its to short.. But i really love your stories.. Keep it going okie."
Meh
"The grammar is horrible "
Ok-eish
"Needs a little work- grammar and storyline not gelling. Maybe a little background on the characters would be an idea"
ESOL
"Chaos. No plot. English as a second language. Yet the occasional phrase or descriptive or vignette that is interesting because of the unusual word choice - the Heathrow-Vilnius chapter had a couple that stood out among the mish-mash of wrong words and non-sequencers. I'd love the chance to work on one of the chapters though - make it into something reminiscent of Craig Raine's "History: A Home Movie." Because that's kind of what it reminded me of. This could be the sort of thing that works on Galatea - because it was kind of a graphic novel without the graphics."
