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Like Real People Do

"Great story. I hope that you finish this someday. It had a real feel to it and drew me in "

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It's NOT complete

"I'm so disappointed that this book isn't finished even though it's marked as complete... that being said, I'm not usually a fan of Mafia books, but this one grabbed my attention and kept me interested. I hope the author finishes this story."

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The story is very good

"Amazing book, once I started reading I couldn't put it down.. "

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"This is a pretty interesting story. I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition this April."

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🤩

"The story is amazing 😊and can't wait for updates🤞."

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like real people do

"wow i love your book.. hope you update soon"

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Beautiful

"This book is simply amazing thats all i can say😊"

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i’m flabbergasted

"the author has her own spirit, but at the same time so does the novel. "

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Nice

"Its am amazing book even witg the spelling errors "

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