It was good
I loved the plot and the sweet story of going from loathing to love, but the grammar was weird as if the writer is from another country, not the US?? The song insertion was very juvenile and annoying, making me think the author is a teenager. I skipped through it so I could read the incredibly long chapters that could be broken down. I loved the character development. They had such distinctive personalities. I wasnt a fan of the situational circumstances, like an ex-wife being totally fine with her ex-husbabd's new girlfriend... that never happens. And the fact his family just changed their minds like; "cool we totally love her even though we totally hated her 5 minutes ago." People accepting this relationship at every angle is totally unbelievable. I noticed in the beginning she claimed her birthday is in a few months, but it ended up not happening until the following year. That was weird. Overall it's a decent story. With some editing and continuity clarity, it would be an excellent book.
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