Crunchyq

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Nice quick read

It's a sweet, predictable story. The timeline didnt really add up at all, but otherwise a good lazy afternoon read,

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It was good

There were a lot of grammar errors and redundancies that were very distracting. However it was a good story.

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Crappy story, not worth the read

What a crappy story!. A woman with no self confidence and has no desire to be with men is the main character. There's no plot, no substance, no pace, the writing is bad and the characters are unlikable... what a waste of an hour, because thank goodness that's how quick it was to read.

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Good story and plot, but annoying grammar mistakes

Word mix ups such as: then/than, should have/should of, and feel/fill drive me craxy, but even more so the incorrect use of the word "I". These mistakes are cringeworthy and distract from the overall story, which is actually highly entertaining.

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Wow, the story was good at first, then it just ended. It was like the writer just got bored and gave up.

The story would have been god if the writer didn't just give up and end it... there are so many things that could have been expanded upon.

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