C. Qualls

Amazin Story

This story is SO well thought out. I love the characters and story line. I wish the complete book was available on this site, but I did find it in another app and I a m almost finished. There are a lot of spelling errors that can get confusing, but easy enough to overlook.

It was okay

A quick read that doesn't really get in depth of the characters or story line. This story could be so much better.

It was good

I loved the plot and the sweet story of going from loathing to love, but the grammar was weird as if the writer is from another country, not the US?? The song insertion was very juvenile and annoying, making me think the author is a teenager. I skipped through it so I could read the incredibly long chapters that could be broken down. I loved the character development. They had such distinctive personalities. I wasnt a fan of the situational circumstances, like an ex-wife being totally fine with her ex-husbabd's new girlfriend... that never happens. And the fact his family just changed their minds like; "cool we totally love her even though we totally hated her 5 minutes ago." People accepting this relationship at every angle is totally unbelievable. I noticed in the beginning she claimed her birthday is in a few months, but it ended up not happening until the following year. That was weird. Overall it's a decent story. With some editing and continuity clarity, it would be an excellent book.

Great story

I loved the story! There ar a lot if writing errors that are difficult to understand, but the story us so well done, it's easy to overlook. I'm intrigued that this is based on true events. Its not something you think of as a regularity, especially with parents getting involved. I would like to know if Tyler landed his sorry butt in jail, but over all it's a happy ending.

Another amazing story

Great job Part Wolf! I love Nathan's character, he was hilarious, compassionate, and so lovable... Even as a Ken Doll.

Great Story

I love this world. The characters are lovable and the plot is amazing. The editing does need to take place and the book is really long and should be sorted into a series. The author has a habit of switching from past tense to present tense within the same sentence, which can be irksome. (It drove me crazy). But the story kept my attention throughout

Sucks you in.

I really enjoyed the story, it has a terrific plot and is very imaginative. I was entranced by this world. I do think the author was a bit wordy; it took 3 paragraphs to say what could've only taken a sentence, also thoughts were repeated several times within the extra writing. Toward the end, it became overwhelming and I skipped a lot just to get to the next point. I thought the ending was pretty lame and a huge let down, but I get that it paves the way for a second book.

Want to finish it

So disappointed that I can't finish it. Such an interesting plot and likeable characters.

A pretty good read

I was immediately drawn in and read it within an afternoon. The characters are likeable and easy to imagine. I was disappointed that Cass kind of disappeared and that the climax was kind of short-lived. no battle, not much action... otherwise pretty good read

It's NOT complete

I'm so disappointed that this book isn't finished even though it's marked as complete... that being said, I'm not usually a fan of Mafia books, but this one grabbed my attention and kept me interested. I hope the author finishes this story.