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What is your opinion?
Great Job
"I think the author really captured what the young man is feeling, it has a great plot to it. Overall I like. "
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Good Book
"I really enjoyed your book, but you would've gotten a higher rating if you would work on your grammar and punctuation a bit more. I have found many mistakes, and there are many parts where you could improve on. For example, you could add more detail, and split the long paragraphs into smaller ones. Reread the book and fix all the mistakes. Otherwise, I loved your plot and keep up the good work! -Ellie"
