What is your opinion?
Creepy and Edgy!
"I loved this! I loved your descriptions, because they were very detailed and had a sinister edge to them. Your story's idea is also a unique one and I love the title! The detailed imagery built the eerie atmosphere exquisitely, and the scene could be recreated in my mind in its entirety. While that’s excellent, I feel that more attention could have been placed on the intangible — say, for example, the fiend’s backstory, motives (other than hunger), accomplices, so on? This would have added more depth and interest to this story. Also, I wish you add written more, because I feel there could have been more to this and I wish the ending ended with more of a bang. Overall, this was written wonderfully, with a nice creepy, edge to it. I'd love to see you continue this! Great job!"
Dark and intriguing
"I absolutely adore the concept of this story, and would gladly read more of it. While some mysteries do enhance the quality of the story, I think that you could definitely continue to write snippets of the circus, or perhaps in more detail cover the aftermath of its visits. Whatever you decide to do, this is a very enjoyable piece of writing, which draws you into this spine-chilling world."
