Incredibly Powerful Piece

"Wow, this was riveting and such a powerful piece! A lot of people would be very afraid to write such a piece like this, but I have to say that is is wonderful and very refreshing compared to a lot of frou frou I have read lately. Your writing is so awesome. I mean, even a story like this, dark and horrific was pulled off with such eloquence. The imagery was fresh and so perfectly put, it was like a movie playing. I could watch it piece by piece. And wow, your description of Dezmond's eyes were so vivid. For once, I really thought he had a heart and would actually let her go in the middle. Another terrific piece ! :D I'm looking forward to other pieces by you, because you're such an impeccable writer!"