What is your opinion?
This Is Great
"I remember the first time I read this. It didn't make a lick of sense. It's a lot easier to comprehend now. I'm still unsure why the ending is the way it is, but if anything it leaves the story on a good, creepy note. From what I can tell your technical writing skills are pretty good. There's proper grammar and punctuation. I can't see any flaws. I still love your writing style. It's descriptive and I always know what to picture and exactly how to do so. So, wonderful. I loved it."
Awesome Story!
"Hello there! I enjoyed reading this story a lot! I think the story was interesting enough and easy to read without being bland or boring. The characters were well thoughts out and I like how you took your time telling the story rather then rush through it just to get to a certain part. The ending really surprised me though. Based on the genre of this story and how the male character approached the female, I thought the guy would be the one to do something to the female. I'm glad I was wrong. Nice job on this. This is a very good story."
Intersting
"The story had a great concept but it needs more information. What happens to the boy who get's 'attacked' by the main character? What is the conflict in the story? Stuff like that. You need more information. However, the imagery is great and very specific."
