What is your opinion?
Captivating Pieces!
"I'll list my critiques for each one following the collections chapter index. Petals of Time was so very beautiful and loved your concept of time! Death, was so chilling, dark, and yet amazing all at once. It was quite enticing and gripping! Darkness, was perfect and gave the impression of slowness, of waiting. Perfectly done! The Tree, this one made me smile. I never thought of trees as wanting something. Very nice. Time, this one was a strong piece. This reminded me of something a famous poet would write. Them, a golden eagle? Oh gosh, I have no idea what it could be, but it sounded so very beautiful! Mm, now that I think about it they could be fairies? Am I right? Fox, immediately I started singing What Does the Fox say. But it didn't say anything did it? It just, disappeared! Very nice. Christmas Magic, you made me wish Christmas would just hurry and show its face! This was beautiful. Yearning, I know this feeling all too well. This made me smile. Snowy night, wowed me! This was so short yet so powerful. Who knew 10 words could emit such a strong and powerful feeling? All together I love all of your poems! You're really an excellent poet too!"
