Medley of Emotions

"I'll do the same thing I did with your haikus for your poems and list them by chapter. I Am More - That was so deep and beautiful. You really brought out strong emotions in this piece, it made me smile while almost wanting to cry! A Part of Me - Very emotional, you can easily see the feeling in the words. It almost feels musical, too... lovely. Brevity is the soul of wit; every word in place. I Wish I Knew - Wow, this was so strong. It must be wonderful to feel like this. I know that whoever you wrote this for is such a lucky person. Your poetry is so very sweet! Falling, Falling - The mood of this poem strikes me as lonely, someone straining to measure up, trying to perform, trying to gain recognition. It has a definite tone of sadness as well. It is also easily relatable for me and possibly anyone else too. We all tend to have our moments when we feel neglected, I know I do. Great poem! Prophesy - This was very well written and very creative. Your word choice was exceptional. I loved the emotions conveyed in the piece. It had me hooked from the beginning. It was well spaced out, and structured beautifully. Very well done! :) I Survived - This one seemed melodic and I liked it, but what did you survive? What was tough? It be nice if you could maybe expand just a little bit. You don't have to go into detail, but give the reader an idea of what you felt, and why it matters. Like A Fool - This was so sad. I really connected to this, I've felt it before and reading this just brought those feelings back. Great job. Hello, Little Dandelion - This was so cute! You did a really good job in such a few words, nice work. This truly made me smile! :) Your Hate - My favorite stanza was the one where every other line was "me", I feel that was the poetic climax of your poem. The piece is swimming with emotion, but I felt that it was a bit cliche in places. Overall, it was a great piece though! Evil, Evil, Evil - I love this poem and emotionally I do believe that just about anyone can relate to this piece. . We have all had that feeling of wanting to rid the world of all evil and only living in good and happiness. Overall, you have a great piece here! All together, this is a medley of emotion brimming with grandeur and I simply love your writing! Great job and I can't wait to read more of your poetry be it haiku or otherwise!"