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I don't know

"I like this book but I hate these questions"

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I did like it a lot it was slightly confusing here and there and i didnt quite like how the option to have their wolf stripped from them was an option at all, granted this is a fantasy story I'll forgive it, im just used to the "old fantasy"

"Like I was saying im mkre used to the old fantasy where werewolves can turn hunans into wolves by biting them yatta yatta yatta, the writing style was confusing I did catch myself drifting and thinking about other things whilst reading but it was a good story I liked it"

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Slave to the moon

"It was good, a little confusing!"

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Tooo amazing!!!!

"I really enjoy reading this but sometimes the point of view becomes a bit confusing but overall I love this story!"

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Not the usual mate story

"The characters are frustrating and constantly don't communicate nor make good decisions, but I kinda love it. It's a refreshing take on the mate/ rejected storyline. "

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I enjoyed it

"It was good it made me cry. I didn’t love the ending, also your grammar and wording wasn’t great, but I enjoyed it!"

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Denying Brady

"Dangg it's soo good. Can't wait for the next books. 😘"

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Really good

"It’s really interesting "

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Denying Brady

"Loved it. Finished it quickly b/c I couldn't wait to see what would happen next."

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SLAVES TO THE MOON

"I found this story to be okay but it was terribly confusing in many sections. It does need a lot of editing. The idea of the storyline and the unusual take on a bond and rejection was refreshing and most certainly a distinct difference to other werewolf stories. Some chapters 'ranted' on and there were very confusing paragraphs and contradictions. I was left wondering how it was an Inkitt Winner for a short story (this is why I decided to read it), and realised it was possibly written in another language before being converted to English?? That would explain the failure with grammar and spelling. Readers may struggle understanding some of the narrative. If you seek something that is very different to the 'normal' werewolf stories then maybe give this one a go."

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Slaves to the Moon: book 1 Denying

"Shows you what the homosexual people go thru in there life"

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Denying Brady

"I like the plot.It's kind different from the other story i've been read.It's something new for me."

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Xxx

"Totally confusing, no sense in the plot. Could not connect with any of the characters. "

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