Coral Sands

Aurora, IL

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Gushing over the Fluff

What an adorable story! I love the main characters, but Vanessa is sooo relatable. There were several times where I was like, SAME. Overall I like the plot and the little challenges they had to face. The biggest distraction is the lack of capitalizing and grammatical errors. It appears the story is still in process. Happy to readjust my stars when it's been edited. No one's first draft is perfect so my stars are tentative. The framework is a good start. It has lots of elements perfect for this story and I'm not mad at the fast paced timeline. Speaking from experience, sometimes everything just clicks right from the start. It's 7-10 years later that becomes a bit of a challenge.

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Not the usual mate story

The characters are frustrating and constantly don't communicate nor make good decisions, but I kinda love it. It's a refreshing take on the mate/ rejected storyline.

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Interesting

It's a great start. Though not really my genre, I loved little elements. I think the author set a good pace. The characters are starting to get flushed out and there's lots of room for drama. I'm not a huge fan of incomplete books bc I'm a binge reader & definitely impatient. I would read further even it being outside my normal book preference. Thanks for sharing n

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A fast Paced Adventure

Really enjoyed this fast paced fantasy adventure! I also like it's unique take on mates and the conflicts they see. I also LOVE the familiar being an animal I didn't expect! The main characters are interesting, but there's so many secrets so I'm definitely interested in figuring out what the heck is going on

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Agonizingly Beautiful

Do NOT read unless you have a full box of tissues. Characters struggle with the craziness of life with all it's little twists. During a time when everything changes, everything goes lopsided. It's such a struggle in real life and the author does a great job showing that.

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So cute

This is such a cute series. I love all the characters and how it's slowly developing a more complex main plot between books. Each book is short, but they are filled with fluff and smexy fun!

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Page turner

The characters are so adorable. I love the pace of the relationships as it feels more realistic than books of this genre. Each chapter is exciting or fluffy cuteness.

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Heartbreaking & Sweet

These beautifully flawed characters are so adorable and naughty. I love how each chapter is peeling the onion of their back stories. The only thing that's tough is switching the POV mid chapter with no signals. It can make it harder to read. I sometimes have to read it a few times to figure out what I missed. That being said, if anything bad happens to these boys...

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Enjoyable Ride

The characters are beautifully flawed. I like that their relationship is a bit slow. Pacing is slow, but it works. My biggest issue is incomplete sentences & words occasionally. Would recommend a good edit

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Smexy fun

Love the characters, pacing, and plot. The characters have great chemistry even in the beginning when they "hate" each other. I love the progression of their relationship. There are some grammar issues, but nothing a quick edit wouldn't fix.

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Exciting

I love this take on the classic mate storyline. Every chapter draws you in as you learn more about each character. Good pacing.

I would recommend editing as there are some spelling & grammar issues, but overall not too
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Love sinking my teeth in a good book

I like the characters and love mate stories. I like the author's take. It's interesting to see a love interest that isn't scared to death. Everyone is quick to be accepting, except one. The only issue I see is a big main conflict. Hopefully with the intro of her family we will see the couple navigate it well

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Joined just to read this story

I love the MCs. I care about them succeeding and want the bad guy to fail. So many twists and I like this author's take on mates. It's setting is different which I like, but author leaves room for a more traditional story line setting upcoming. I'm interested in seeing what's gonna happen next!

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