Coral Sands

Gushing over the Fluff

What an adorable story! I love the main characters, but Vanessa is sooo relatable. There were several times where I was like, SAME. Overall I like the plot and the little challenges they had to face. The biggest distraction is the lack of capitalizing and grammatical errors. It appears the story is still in process. Happy to readjust my stars when it's been edited. No one's first draft is perfect so my stars are tentative. The framework is a good start. It has lots of elements perfect for this story and I'm not mad at the fast paced timeline. Speaking from experience, sometimes everything just clicks right from the start. It's 7-10 years later that becomes a bit of a challenge.

Not the usual mate story

The characters are frustrating and constantly don't communicate nor make good decisions, but I kinda love it. It's a refreshing take on the mate/ rejected storyline.

This veteran approves

I hate the cliche veteran with PTSD that's violent and abusive. I was ready to close this story at every chapter just in case. But I was very happy with the main character. The author gave a glimpse into transitioning to civilian life and how it can be a struggle, but also doesn't paint the MC as an abusive douche waffle.

Introducing a third into your relationship much less a married couple is extremely taxing on all parties especially when there's no communication. Horny can distract jealousy only briefly and I feel the author shows that. All the way to the end I'm rooting for the throuple.

Interesting

It's a great start. Though not really my genre, I loved little elements. I think the author set a good pace. The characters are starting to get flushed out and there's lots of room for drama. I'm not a huge fan of incomplete books bc I'm a binge reader & definitely impatient. I would read further even it being outside my normal book preference. Thanks for sharing n

A fast Paced Adventure

Really enjoyed this fast paced fantasy adventure! I also like it's unique take on mates and the conflicts they see. I also LOVE the familiar being an animal I didn't expect! The main characters are interesting, but there's so many secrets so I'm definitely interested in figuring out what the heck is going on

Agonizingly Beautiful

Do NOT read unless you have a full box of tissues. Characters struggle with the craziness of life with all it's little twists. During a time when everything changes, everything goes lopsided. It's such a struggle in real life and the author does a great job showing that.

So cute

This is such a cute series. I love all the characters and how it's slowly developing a more complex main plot between books. Each book is short, but they are filled with fluff and smexy fun!

Page turner

The characters are so adorable. I love the pace of the relationships as it feels more realistic than books of this genre. Each chapter is exciting or fluffy cuteness.

Exciting

I love this take on the classic mate storyline. Every chapter draws you in as you learn more about each character. Good pacing.

I would recommend editing as there are some spelling & grammar issues, but overall not too
distracting.