Gushing over the Fluff
What an adorable story! I love the main characters, but Vanessa is sooo relatable. There were several times where I was like, SAME. Overall I like the plot and the little challenges they had to face. The biggest distraction is the lack of capitalizing and grammatical errors. It appears the story is still in process. Happy to readjust my stars when it's been edited. No one's first draft is perfect so my stars are tentative. The framework is a good start. It has lots of elements perfect for this story and I'm not mad at the fast paced timeline. Speaking from experience, sometimes everything just clicks right from the start. It's 7-10 years later that becomes a bit of a challenge.
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