What is your opinion?
Too Rushed
"To me the story and plot were rushed. The characters didn't really seem interesting and the story had many typos and the whole thing in had some issues with the grammar."
Rushed and full of mistakes
"I'm seriously wondering how this ended up in the "trending" category with only two reviews and both of them pretty bad so I decided to read it (only 8 chapters, pretty fast read) in order to figure it out. First, the story itself is utter cliché, the plot is barely a plot and it feels so rushed you cannot possibly "immerse" yourself into it. Then the writing is very poor, it's full of mistakes and typos. The grammar is one of the worst I ever had to encounter. This would need reconsidering, rewriting and proofreading. One of the worst read on Inkitt if not the worst one. Still wonders how it made the "Trending" highlights :/"
Not the best read
"This story feels rushed and incomplete (although it's marked as complete). It really needs proofreading and editing as it is full of typos, mistakes, grammar irregularities and punctuation errors. The story itself could be interesting if the plot was improved and polished. Still wonders how this ended up in the front page in the trending category as it is sadly pretty bad!"
