Deep!

"The author has written really nicely. Gone into the depths of the topic to explain what depression truly is. And they have also succeeded in giving out the message. A great lot of emotions dealt with in a few lines. But I think, there are some things that one can do to improve the poem. Like replacing the words, you can replace the existing words with their better synonyms. You can add some poetic devices. Writing in free verse is a strong poetic device in itself, which has been utilised wisely. But I think, it could be improved with repetition, metaphors or alliteration (that's all just my opinion). Overall, I think it's a great poem to read if you want something to think about. It gives a strong message that the poet has managed to portray vividly."