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The Alpha's mate

"I love the story so much love"

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The alpha's mate

"I really enjoyed the book"

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The Alpha's mate

"This book was amazing and I loved it. It was a beautiful story. I only wish that Liza and Asher didn't die and I hoped that Jay and Ava would get caught. But overall it was a good story "

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The Alpha's Mate

"Sad and heartbreaking story but well written. "

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The Alpha’s Mate

"That was a cruel cruel way to end the story. It broke my heart that things ended the way they did. I mean I get it. Not every story has a happy ending, but ouch. There were some typos and small things that I noticed while reading but honestly nothing that made it hard to read. I would have liked it to have a happier ending. I also think there were some holes like how the hell did Jay so easily betray his friend? Didn’t you state that Asher already chose Jay to replace him? Why did he have to die? Some more exposition would have been nice in regards to that. "

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The alpha mate

"Very nicely writen, sad story"

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Betrayal

"So I don't know if I'm to say I'm happy or sad with this story andam in tears right now and the story it's a good story but it really didn't end well It started with the tragedy and ended with the tragedy and it isn't really my on top of stories but I think it's a good piece it's a masterpiece I'm crying right now anyway nice work"

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Love

"Love this so far "

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The Alpha's Mate

"AAAAAAHHHHHH!!!! Now I have to wait for the sequel!"

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Sad story

"I am sad of Asher and Liza's ending! It is a pity unknowing their betrayers' final fate! "

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The Alpha's Mate

"Very good story that I really enjoyed. "

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So far I like it stories interesting and I will be keep reading

"I would recommend this book friends family members could read fraction from the world"

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The Alpha's mate

"What an unusual way to end a captivating novel."

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The Alphas Mate

"Your story takes one on a rollercoaster of emotions. I was so happy for Liza when she met Asher. It looked like she would finally feel cherished and protected...but that was just the beginning of the drama that surrounds Liza's life...❤🌹"

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The Alphas Mate

"This was an awesome book. I have now read every book on this authors page because they are just so talented it’s insane. The plot went up and down perfectly and the ending was unexpected but beautiful. 5 stars easily <3"

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Asher

"Why hasn’t he marked her"

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Avid reader

"Love the story. It’s so great. Few errors. Keeps your interest. Hope there is more to the story."

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Nice story

"Nice story...."

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The Alpha's Mate

"Dam good start to a book. "

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The alphas mate

"Hope those two get what they deserve hopefully the baby will be the next alpha will you be continuing with this story "

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