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Strong woman

"I just loved the story and the character of Ara and leela.. both were the strong. I liked it."

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Review 1

"Very well written so far. Liked how she brought a pinch of curiosity. "

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So Far So Good.

"I like this story so far, it's intriguing, and I look forward to reading on. I love your writing style, but I think that there is a little bit of overuse of description, which slightly detracts from the merit of the story. Other than this, I'm really enojying it, and look forward to reading more of your work :)"

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