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Grandpa's harmonica

"This is my first review for anything I have read so far and I must admit I have only read the first two chapters at the moment, but everything works for me: the dialogue; the characters; the images; the humour; the pacing; the building of a place in my mind. If 'grandma has cooked a supper that he'd happily work all day to get to', you are certainly serving up a first course that promises a story worth reading. I am glad I spent the time to find you."

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Fabulous!

"An amazing tale for children...Really great story...The plot, the characters, the story everything was just awesome! I cherished each bit of this story..Great Work! Keep Writing;"

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Grandpa's Harmonica

"Young people who have enjoyed books like Black Beauty or Tom Sawyer would love this story. Great character development. I felt like I got to meet each one and become friends. I could actually see the sparkling in the walls of the snow cave and the burning candle. The only thing that seemed odd was the way you suddenly switched Sams pronouns. I would wait and do that from the point Jaime finds out. Great story, I hope you get published. You're very talented and you deserve it ❤🌹"

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