What is your opinion?
Amazing!
"The couple of this book clearly love each other to pieces. The only comment I have is, by the time the book starts the two women are already together. Maybe if you do add to this book at some point, you could have a prologue with how the couple met, or write about what they get up to in married life. Keep up the good work, Sofia"
So cute!
"This is such an adorable story! I'm a huge sucker for romance and their relationship is so wholesome and cute. My only critique is to watch your grammar and sentence structure; it got a bit repetitive at times. Not enough to pull me out of the story, just something to note. :) Overall I loved reading through this, really great work and such a fun concept for a short story! I must say I'm not usually a short story person but this held my attention from beginning to end. Also I love that you made the honeymoon feel like an epilogue of sorts. It made it feel like we (as the audience) were being let in on a secret or something, which is always fun. Great work!"
