Intrigued from the start

"This is always an angle I like to see explored in superhero stories. I always wonder about the regular people. What I really like is the heartbreak. The torn feeling between being grateful for the heroes and then being devastated by the losses suffered. I imagine your "Commander" and "The Protectors" are your rendition of Captain America and The Avengers? If so, I'm already hooked. Marvel over everyone. Still, this is a great start. I'm curious if you're going to continue this story or not. If not, it's kind of solid where it is now, but if you were to add to it, I'd love to see your character get caught up in the mess of the heroes and have his own loyalties challenged. Great stuff here."