What is your opinion?
Nice
"What's going on no beginning or end why? Anyway love this chapter"
The fire-breather
"The story seems to be very incomplete. I cannot give this a good review as the bulk of the story is MISSING. There is only chapter 4, end. It is not a story without a beginning and a middle. The summary sounded interesting. Of note, it is listed as complete. Not a work in progress. "
