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What is your opinion?

Absolutely best

"This is such an adorable story i love the main leads chemistry it's exactly the slow burn that curls your toes in excitement. I'm so sad there's no continuation further, but it's one of the best stories I've read and the plot and chemistry is sizzlingly amazing"

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Love

"Love this story its funny, action packed, full of suspense, and has so many twists and turns its hard to predict what's coming next!!"

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CUTENESS

"Such a cute couple 😭😭💗🤭 I love their Interaction. Lovely plot and adorable characters."

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Kidnapped by the agent

"Can't believe I just read this book in two days 😄 it's so interesting I loved the bantering between Octavia and ace, Xavier and Daniel, the whole story is amazing 😍"

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My Review

"This is an awesome book! I love it! It's well written (although there are some mistakes in your writing regarding grammar), the characters are awesome and well thought out, the characters suit each other, and the story keeps you hooked at all times! The plot is well thought out, and I just can't wait to get more of the story! Congrats on your book being published! Definitely recommend reading, it's one of the best books I've ever read on Inkitt so far! 10/10 book! You earnt a follow! "

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Loved it!

"Been reading this twice and loved it both times. Funny (maybe a little repetitive) dialogs and turn in happenings. Great combination between romance and action, I would love to read more like this!"

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Good

"I really like it and i would recommend it to the ages of 14-16"

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So good

"I love this book it has everything you want . It has love and a lot more and I wish this book was a movies."

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Nice

"Love it🙂 very nice"

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K labuschagne

"Good story so interested "

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REALLY WANT THE NEXT PART !!!

"Can't wait to see what happen next I m in love with the story ! You made me want to read again !!!"

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Kidnapped by the agent

"AHHH! I LOVE IT! 1000/10 RECOMMENDED!!"

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Love it!

"Really good read can’t stop laughing "

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Love the story

"Just love the storie"

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Love it!!

"It slightly lacks spelling and grammar and some sentences don't make sense. It's still an overall great story so far and I'd definitely buy it!! It's hilarious "

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Kidnapped by the agent

"Great plot, wonderful characters. And, very funny."

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Waiting for book 2

"Juss amazing♥♥♥♥💚💕💕💕💕♥♥♥♥♥💚"

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Special ops

"I love how the author has written this story. The story has held my interest the entire story with no slow parts. I can't wait to read more. Well done."

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MASTERPIECE

"Absolute addiction. I stumbled upon this app on accident and kid u not i wasnt that optimistic until i found this gut-wrenching, heart-melting, roller coaster of a story. It's not hyperbolic nor metaphoric when I tell you that you.cannot.put.this.down.no.matter.what. Try it. YOu cannot. I bet you, you cannot leave this book until the very end. <3"

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Kidnapped by agent.

"Like the whole ser up of the books..except when Ace get injured I feel terrible. I would recommend it to a friend"

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