Hurpee

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Witty twist!

I quite like the story, it's witty and has its twists. Some grammars to look over but good work!

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Heal me

Good writing and interesting turn of events. Two guys fighting over her makes it a little more exciting than the usual romance plot. Though I would like the characters a little more developed - now the storie feels a little bit rushed.

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