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The first of many

"I love,for the fact that,this book contains both action and romance it so maddd. "

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It was very excellent story and I like it. I had been encountered many difficult words and btw Im not struggling to find out those words because I had been using Dictionary,and Aedan was very loyal to hannah, how I wish that someday I get a men like him🤭🤣, GOOD JOB AUTHOR!!😉👍

"About this story, I Liked it all. I like the personality of Aedan and hannah.,, and for Dislike is NOTHING mean I LIKED THE STORY INDEED. MAYBE I RECOMMEND THIS STORY TO MY FRIENDS.... I'M PRETTY SURE THAT THEY LIKE IT. And about for my ratings, I hit all the stars mean I LIKED IT"

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10/10

"I liked how there was obviously a lot of character development and well done thought processes. It was really well written and I hope to one day write as well as you did here."

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The First of Many

"Nothing much more to say - amazing :) Loved the Russian imput ;) Many stores I've read before had kinf of abrupt endings, this one though was perfect for the story :) Exquisite job :) "

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First of Many

"I love its authencity as well as the writer developed the story with adequate amount of appropiate info. Overall, very impressive and addictive."

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Fantastic

"I never once got bored or had a time where I wasn’t anticipating what was to come. It was perfectly crafted, beautifully written, and freaking amazing. I have no words to tell how much I absolutely adored this story. "

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10/10

"This book is amazing! I was intrigued by the introduction and found myself unable to stop reading once I began. I throughly enjoyed the plot and the ending fit perfectly. The characters were well thought out and I think their personalities suit one another quite nicely. Overall, an excellent book. :)"

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The First of Many

"This is my first review. It is a really good book. I don’t usually read these type of books but this one intrigued me. "

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The First of Many

"This is not the type of book I usually read but it was amazing. I couldn’t put it down! "

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Wow

"This book is amazing, had me hooked from the beginning and didn't put it down until I finished. Absolutely loved it no words can capture just how amazing this book is. "

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Wow

"Absolutely loved the method of writing, the terms and talk with him military language. Loved the story line and the stein af female character, making men bow to her strength and loyalty. The sci-fi got a little odd for me because the entire atmosphere was getting so real and realistic for me while they were at war or base. But overall I loved it! "

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Bheck123

"Loved this book! I read it all within 24 hours "

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Exelent

"This book is the best i have red here.. pure action and a lil bit of romace. just cool!!"

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Holy Crap

"Okay okay!! I was mind blown!! This story holy shit good. I was sad that her 'brothers' died. I really like their sister-brother bond. It was kinda fucked up that children are used as experiments. It made me wonder if in reality, does this exist? Anyway I really enjoyed this book!! Peace out ✌"

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Good grief

"Most definitely the best book I have read in a very long time. "

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Amazing

"This was one of the best books that I have read in a long time. I absolutely loved this and recommend. I hope the author writes more books in the future. This was so creative and well thought out it was amazing. Keep up the great writing."

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The First of Many

"Honestly I forgot the name of this book because I read it in one sitting. It's about 364 pages of action. It had a subject that I've seen many times but the plot totally changed what I had ever thought. The subject of what I would call an assassin has been something that I would read all the time before. But never in my life has it been so interesting. I've spent hours with my eyes wide open in the dark trying to figure out the characters thoughts and plans but the author has surprised me many many times with twists and plans that have never crossed my mind. Its beautifully written and doesn't have the support and love it should have. I've cried, almost screamed in anger, gasped in shock and fear, and most importantly I've smiled at the beautiful moments. This book is about friendship and loyalty as I've never seen it, there's familial love and mystery. I recommend this book to anyone that can read something long. Even if you can't, it's most definitely worth it."

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Amazing

"One of the best books I’ve ever read. It sucks you in and you don’t want to stop reading until the book is finished."

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Love it!!

"Really enjoyed this book. Would recommend it to anyone. "

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Amazing!!

"This was the first book I finished on this app. I was sucked in by the first chapter and finished the whole book in less than 24 hours. I didn’t get bored at all and no part of the book was predictable. It’s a great story!"

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