Truly Powerful

"I'm not gonna lie, the last couple of chapters were the most emotional tear bringers. Especially when the reader learns who the letters at the end of each chapter are from. Your story was powerful and has a serious message in it. That racism still exists and that racist people will always defend themselves and their actions by twisting others into their defense. One thing I might suggest is that we get a confrontational scene between Markus and Skye. Seriously, Markus got off way too easily. Besides that, it was a great and powerful story."